For my final paper I decided on the topic Breast Cancer. By the
end of this semester I would like to research the main factors that causes
breast cancer. most people think that breast cancer is genetic I think that
there are causes and things you do to your body that makes you get breast
cancer. The reason why I chose this topic is because when I was younger my
grandmother died from inflammatory breast cancer which left my mother to raise
my grandmother youngest child as her own. Ever since my grandmother passed from
inflammatory breast with her being the first person ever in our family to die
from cancer we have been really big on anything dealing with breast cancer such
as fundraisers, walks, etc. While working on this project I have learned that
there are number of factors that have been proven to increase a woman's risk of
breast cancer. factors associated with breast cancer risk are linked to
estrogen. Women who begin their period at a younger age and enter menopause at
an older age have a greater lifetime exposure to estrogen, which increases
their breast cancer risk. Women who don't have kids or have kids after the age
of thirty are also at higher risk to get breast cancer. Obesity is another
estrogen related risk factor for breast cancer. Approximately 5 to 10 percent
of all breast cancers are genetic. A personal history or family history of
breast cancer also increases the likelihood of developing the disease. Having a
mother, sister, or daughter with breast cancer approximately doubles a woman's
risk for the disease.
"Preface to 'Does Abortion Increase the Risk of Breast Cancer?'." Breast Cancer, edited by Dedria Bryfonski, Greenhaven Press, 2016. Opposing Viewpoints. Opposing Viewpoints in Context, http://libproxy.ggc.edu/login?url=http://link.galegroup.com/apps/doc/EJ3010982104/OVIC?u=ggcl&xid=. Accessed 14 Mar. 2018.
You great ideas, but still have some grammar issues. Try writing your blog posts on MS Word first and run the spell and grammar checker. Then copy over to Blogger.
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